Hey VERA! I need help crafting a creative and engaging update email for a college coach that avoids the generic ‘Hi Coach, just wanted to send an update.’
Here’s what I want to include:
1️⃣ Opening Hook: [Describe an exciting, personal, or interesting moment from my season.]
2️⃣ Academic/Personal Growth: [What I’m enjoying in school, a leadership role, or a personal lesson learned.]
3️⃣ Volleyball Development: [What I’m improving on in practice, how my game is evolving, or a challenge I’ve overcome.]
4️⃣ Team/Travel Experience: [A meaningful moment with my team, a fun trip, or something that shows my personality.]
5️⃣ Highlight Video & Upcoming Games: [Drop the highlight link + where my team is playing next.]
6️⃣ Closing & Call to Action: [Ask an open-ended question to encourage a response.]
Make the email engaging, story-driven, and unique while keeping it professional. Let’s make it stand out!
VERA Sample Prompt #3
March 17, 2025